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Preeti Matta's avatar

Naina I love the way you weave the words and thoughts! Keep bringing more. Hugs!

Naina Raturi's avatar

Thanks Preeti :)

Sarah Teresa Cook's avatar

This was a lovely read--and that last line!! Oof.

This really jumped out at me, too:

"The rest of them are tracings on the paper of memory

of who I became and who she became."

Naina Raturi's avatar

Thank you for reading and letting me know what spoke to you, Sarah!

Raju Tai's avatar

"It was in the entrancing envelope

we created in those moments

of pure devotion to fun.

Fun became joy became beauty."

Beautiful lines that softened my gaze instantly.

Naina Raturi's avatar

Thank you, Raju!